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~The chosen one~

Post by Kane on 3rd April 2011, 8:43 am

~The chosen one~
~Chapter 1~

half serious/half hilarious rpg

Hello folks n.n

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Filian [Name = wip] awakes higih in the sky, in front of an iron gate. an angel awaits him, and as soon as he talks to her God walks to him. he tells filian that he is 'The chosen one', the only person on earth who can defeat the Devil. [or evil God, whattevah u wish] Filian, confused as he is, follows God's instructions and joins the local army. after he finished his training [a training of a year] The troops from the dark lands attack his peaceful country. God tells the chosen one he has to find the armor of Marion [Name = wip]. as soon as he wears all the pieces of the armor, he transforms into a giant, and can defeat the evil army.

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Post by NotteEterna on 3rd April 2011, 9:06 am

Don't you think that's abit much for the first chapter in your game? And it sounds abit like a used story, but nonetheless, it sounds like it will be really good Very Happy (confused? I would be too)

I know this isnt the recruting page, but would you mind if I were a tile artist for it?

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Post by Kane on 3rd April 2011, 9:36 am

It sounds good, altough i'm done with the tilesets *ashamed*
i did it myself already u.u
but i could use someone who gives constructive criticsm for now.

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Post by NotteEterna on 3rd April 2011, 9:42 am

Oh, don't worry about it then. I'm not too good yet anyway I dont think...

And I'd love to see them Smile ...and Critisism should be my middle name so if you want, I can do that.

Anytime Kane
thats what just about everything I have made so far is missing. T-T

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Post by Strawberrycat on 3rd April 2011, 4:03 pm

you shouldn't use tables for clouds...I think theres an mack to rtp of the heaven cloud tiles.

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Post by Arco on 3rd April 2011, 4:07 pm

Berry is right.

And if it's snowy things around it, why not use the snow tile?
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Post by Rose Guardian on 3rd April 2011, 8:08 pm

Your game looks good, but I have to agree with Strawberrycat24 and Arco. You shouldn't use tables as clouds it looks a little weird. Other than that everything else looks good.

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Post by NotteEterna on 3rd April 2011, 8:53 pm

floating tables~ ....but really...theyre right...

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Post by Kane on 4th April 2011, 2:52 am

hmm i'll see what i will do. anyways, i only use rtp and a tile E of rtp stile u.u
i want to keep that.. i will look what i'll change

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Post by NotteEterna on 4th April 2011, 11:24 pm

makes sense. I would just have used a pictured cloud over and the parallax for below in that case. but It is very creative so I give you credit for that Very Happy ...plus finding the pic for that would be annoying...

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Post by Kane on 5th April 2011, 1:16 am

hmmhm. and i can't find the cloud tileA2 >.<
searched bloody damn whole pages of rpgmakervx to find them. *im a failure n.n*
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Post by Strawberrycat on 5th April 2011, 11:58 am

It's a mack conversion, did you search "Mack to RTP A2 Tilesets"?

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I made my own edit...I hope it works well.

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Post by Kane on 6th April 2011, 1:16 am

i have the non edited... lemme have a look n.n

Edit: Didn't work better then non-edited. yours haz lil error Sad
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Post by Strawberrycat on 6th April 2011, 12:09 pm

yeah it's a lil rough on the inner corners. I made a demo map and it looks a little sharp in places.

at least it's better than tables.

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Post by Kane on 7th April 2011, 1:18 am

yea but as i said i now haz original clouds n.n
uploading in three hours, when i get back from school
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Post by Kane on 8th April 2011, 10:49 am

Added Mapping-show demo.
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Post by NotteEterna on 10th April 2011, 9:27 am

Kane, I just realized something with the ship...Its stairs dont line up the upper and lower floor proparly in the screenshot.

EDIT: The demo maps look nice, but due to some tiles (mushrooms, flowers, etc.) it is actually possible to walk on the mountain parts in some places.

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Post by Kane on 11th April 2011, 1:57 pm

yup, mentioned that, already fixed n.n~
Man, do you guys sometimes feel like you're never going to finish your game because your story sucks? (like you make progress waaaay to fast T.T)
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Post by Strawberrycat on 11th April 2011, 2:13 pm

XD Sometiomes I feel like I'm never going to finish because my writers aren't doing crap. And I'm almost at the end of what they've written so far.

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Post by NotteEterna on 11th April 2011, 4:26 pm

yeah...thats kind of why I have so many active stories...that and I am hyper-active on the inside.

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Post by Kane on 12th April 2011, 1:05 am

man,, i like my projects for around two weeks... and then i get stuck >.<
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Post by NotteEterna on 12th April 2011, 4:08 pm

If you ever get stuck, maybe I can help? I am bound to be able to come up with something, even if it's just a side-quest or side-story of some kind.

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Post by NotteEterna on 1st May 2011, 2:30 pm

I'm interested in where this will go as it seems quite interesting now that the flying tables are gone. Bumped Smile

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